adding to my ingredients

hmmm... how am i supposed to add to ingredients B and C? well, first i should make sure that i have what i learned from my experience loud and clear, and then make sure that my readers know what they should learn. i want them to learn something from my essay, without me actually telling them what they should learn. the activity we did in class on monday really didn't help that much for me because i had improved my rough draft and did not have the new copy with me in class. so, my partner had to review my old rough draft, so most of his suggestions were ones that i had already made myself.